my website in dev needs you

gdavies

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Can you read well, Can you put together good english, then my website needs you to proof read, What does it mean for you how about 2 free computer repairs meaning, I get rid of virus, spyware or even that forgotten password, More to the point you would get to see what i am working on at the moment.
 

gdavies

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I will consider all of you going as the saying fresh eyes helps, in my case i will update this thing alot before i am happy at the mo i am on the front page i have the design sort of next is the text, after that is done I will be adding in fresh stuff or i hope is fresh stuff.
 

Withnail

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Stick it up here and i have no doubt that many oars will be stuck in.

In a good way, of course. :)
 

gdavies

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i will paste the text from the homepage so far and see what you think so far

This website was made to help you the user out. The internet can be all but a strange place it can be all you want it to be, it can be all that you hate, But most of all it can be all you make of it. In one sense it is like the life we live in the sense that some people you meet you like, Then you have hit a website you bookmark, You can meet someone your not sure of, Then comes along a search engine, Then there is some on you meet that you dislike well that in the internet world is called a firewall. Basic terms its where we sit behind a wall an throw petrol on a fire to keep riff raff away. Only joking a firewall can keep all sorts away, But mostly this website is where you have made your stop to enjoy the short or long haul.

In the development life it means you knuckle down and press on with the work ahead, you make ends meat until the job is done, Which means long hours and short play so as any person under stress will tell you work hard play harder. I however work full time, then design websites in my spare time and fix computers. As you can imagine my time gets shorter as time goes by every now and then i need a week off to catch up and then the long hours kick in. One thing i would say to anyone is that if you dont enjoy what your doing then don't even start. Because the past is forgotten but today is the present so live it like a gift and make use. Although we can't wrap up today andsave it we can however show others what we have to give and make the world a better place, All I ask is that we put in 100% and expect 10% back anything more well look at the present we have been given. Its hard work, well Nothing in life worth living for is easy so why not make it worth your while. We all stress about the small things and forget the larger things in life. In fact it gets to the point as a human being we get the chance to prove ourselves to someone so we choose to slag someone off to prove a point. Well This website is your chance to do what you feel is right.

So far on the very first page of this website you have already seen a big insight as to the kind of developer i am or can be or if not the inspirational ideas i can come out with, There are points in life where you think why do i bother, you are not alone so what we all have those days even those of us that stay up till 4am jst to get up at 8am the next day, But what makes it worth all that strain is that little smile that thank you that passes by in the wind or is it that gentle handshake you get for a good job. Now this hwole section has got you thinkin where have the good old days gone already, Why cause your human you see sociecty and feel its going down hill. Has it gone down hill so much that someone has spent the time to put something like this together for nothing more than the fact that you should enjoy. I have always said that forgive yesterday because it is only the tomorrow we hope for today. For some that will not make sense for some it will. But here is my sese behind it if you feel yesteray was no good then try harder and show the world what you have got to give. It will not give you a handout so work hard play hard and kick back and chill when you can.

It is long and windy but i want to keep it that kind of length have fun first reply from now will get the repairs as well as andreas going as i already sent the pm
 

Withnail

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This website was made to help you, the user, out.

The internet can be a strange place; it can be all you want it to be, it can be all that you hate - but most of all it could be all that you make of it.

In one sense it (the Web?) is like the life we live.
You meet someone you like, you make a date - you hit a website you like, you bookmark it.
You meet someone you're not sure of, you ask around - you hit a website you're not sure of, you Ask Jeeves (perhaps too corny?).

Then there are some you meet that you wish you hadn't. Wouldn't it be good if you could not meet them at all? In the internet world this is possible, and it's called a Firewall.
My tuppence for starters - will look at the rest in due course.

Hope you like it. :)
 

gdavies

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withnail i like where your going as i am sure you can understand with coding and writing an designing i need proof read at the mo my head is on the floor in a good sense lol, if you hit the way back machine you can see how it has changed over time for eg http://wayback.archive.org/web/*/http://gavsguidance.co.uk

you can see when it took snapshots not great snapshots but it took them all the same

the update takes a lot of thought i will unveil to the testers before it is ready just need tidy a few things up
 

Ecker

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Hello again GD.

Are you looking for a critical analysis of the structure and content or just suggestions for grammar, spelling and punctuation?

If it is the former, I am not entirely sure that that is best done via messaging, a spot of
brain storming on a face to face basis with friends is often a far better and usually much quicker method. I would be only too happy to "mind map" this with you.

If it is the latter, I still suspect that an analysis of the content and structure would be a
great help.

Please let me know what you think.
 

gdavies

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Either way ecker my time is limited if honest s at the mo spelling etc but i like where withnail has run with it. Opn to ideas at the mo cause i am do new pages as we speak
 

Withnail

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^^He may be right, you know.

I was rather free with my interpretation - undertook before reading the whole thing. I have to say, having read the whole piece, i'm not sure what you are 'providing' with this website. It would really be necessary to get a feel for the real purpose before crafting accurate content.

I must get out of here at once - Buzzwordmanagementspeakitis is torrenting in my mainframe membrane.

Man.

^ i meant Ecker may be right etc
 

gdavies

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Withnail said:
^^He may be right, you know.

I was rather free with my interpretation - undertook before reading the whole thing. I have to say, having read the whole piece, i'm not sure what you are 'providing' with this website. It would really be necessary to get a feel for the real purpose before crafting accurate content.

I must get out of here at once - Buzzwordmanagementspeakitis is torrenting in my mainframe membrane.

Man.

^ i meant Ecker may be right etc
very true but it is early days for the new site
 

John Marwood

I ♥ cryptic crosswords
gdavies said:
Either way ecker my time is limited if honest s at the mo spelling etc but i like where withnail has run with it. Opn to ideas at the mo cause i am do new pages as we speak
Immortality is such a pain

Not long now and you can be

www.gdavies.pootawizzard or such like

Yours for a mere £114,000.00
 

darts22

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Problems arise from too much information leading to brain overload. Keep it short, note form rather than War and Peace
gdavies said:
i will paste the text from the homepage so far and see what you think so far

This website was made to help you the user out. The internet can be all but a strange place it can be all you want it to be, it can be all that you hate, But most of all it can be all you make of it. In one sense it is like the life we live in the sense that some people you meet you like, Then you have hit a website you bookmark, You can meet someone your not sure of, Then comes along a search engine, Then there is some on you meet that you dislike well that in the internet world is called a firewall. Basic terms its where we sit behind a wall an throw petrol on a fire to keep riff raff away. Only joking a firewall can keep all sorts away, But mostly this website is where you have made your stop to enjoy the short or long haul.

In the development life it means you knuckle down and press on with the work ahead, you make ends meat until the job is done, Which means long hours and short play so as any person under stress will tell you work hard play harder. I however work full time, then design websites in my spare time and fix computers. As you can imagine my time gets shorter as time goes by every now and then i need a week off to catch up and then the long hours kick in. One thing i would say to anyone is that if you dont enjoy what your doing then don't even start. Because the past is forgotten but today is the present so live it like a gift and make use. Although we can't wrap up today andsave it we can however show others what we have to give and make the world a better place, All I ask is that we put in 100% and expect 10% back anything more well look at the present we have been given. Its hard work, well Nothing in life worth living for is easy so why not make it worth your while. We all stress about the small things and forget the larger things in life. In fact it gets to the point as a human being we get the chance to prove ourselves to someone so we choose to slag someone off to prove a point. Well This website is your chance to do what you feel is right.

So far on the very first page of this website you have already seen a big insight as to the kind of developer i am or can be or if not the inspirational ideas i can come out with, There are points in life where you think why do i bother, you are not alone so what we all have those days even those of us that stay up till 4am jst to get up at 8am the next day, But what makes it worth all that strain is that little smile that thank you that passes by in the wind or is it that gentle handshake you get for a good job. Now this hwole section has got you thinkin where have the good old days gone already, Why cause your human you see sociecty and feel its going down hill. Has it gone down hill so much that someone has spent the time to put something like this together for nothing more than the fact that you should enjoy. I have always said that forgive yesterday because it is only the tomorrow we hope for today. For some that will not make sense for some it will. But here is my sese behind it if you feel yesteray was no good then try harder and show the world what you have got to give. It will not give you a handout so work hard play hard and kick back and chill when you can.

It is long and windy but i want to keep it that kind of length have fun first reply from now will get the repairs as well as andreas going as i already sent the pm
 
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